The Mid-Night Train -- Part 1 reviews

hey, nice work with the story - you did a realy good job writting it, and i came right away, especialy when the girls went down on each other....

it was a really good story i really enjoyed it please do more it gets you really hot and wet and wanting more

That story was flat out amazing, made me shoot my load twice....I can't wait for part 2

Average.....unrealistic.......I didn't even bother finishing the story.

hey there..that story was great..i was so wet just reading that. keep up the good work and and feel free to review my work. --"Work" by Katie Johns its in group sex stories and is also my first submission

Very good story but you do need to work on your spelling and punctuation. good work, keep it up!

Very good story, awesome :D.

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