The Making of a Monster reviews

This story fuckin owns

The stories is alright, for the most part. But it does tend to get confusing when you start by calling the brother by one name, Ronnie, and then call him the boyfriends name, Danny. It isnt often, but it does happen a couple times. Other than that its a decent story.

Pub is right. I got a little confused there, but all in all, mike hoxsie is definately correct there.

I agree with mike, this is one hot story. Would like to see more stories writen by Tina, she put alot of details in her writing, not just another 5minute fuck fest.

Most of your stories are fantastic. They are so realistic and detailed. I'd love it if you wrote and submitted some more!

very good story. I like very much

Nice Story! Loved It! Fuck On!