Tawny, Daddy's Little Girl Becomes a Woman-Chapter 2 reviews

It was a slow start, but got better as it went on. A must read.

Wanderful. Pulls you into both roles. I thought it was going to be boring. But in the end it captured me into the story like no other story has. When the next chapter comes in let me know. I have to finish this. "Able to make the softest HARD!"

HOT HOT HOT! Definately NOT a slow start! PJ must be a man... they tend to get stuff done in a hurry! Love the way it deals with the shame yet the excitement for the girl. So very erotic! Keeps you hanging on every word! You can tell this is not just ameteur writing. This is the good stuff! I am so turned on and wet after reading this... my vibrator awaits! Thank you and keep the story going!

I really liked it a lot! It was very very erotic! I couldn't help but to touch myself! You must write more!!!

Good Story! Please finish it!

Sooo good as all your stories are.. what can I say I'm a Powerone addict

Heh I agree with L.. is there not a fan club for Powerone yet??

you need to finish it...

More more more!

I really enjoyed this story! I know that you are coming up with a part three, so I hope that we will be getting it very soon! You are a very talented writer....be sure to please your audience some more and not let us wait too long.