Sex in the woods reviews

The story was quite good. You have alot of potential. Keep at it!

The guy in this story was kind of a two pump jump, and the foreplay and what not was rather.. erm.. lacking. But the writing itself was good.

yeah this story wasnt too great. no detail at all which made it even worse to read. and virgins dont talk like that: "i want you to take my virginity...fuck me" this writer must be a virgin or else he would know a little more about sex

i enjoyed it. keep writing.

I thought the story was good. It was allitle short, but still good.

Keep trying maybe you will hit it out of the park next time, however, this is a fowl ball.

I agree that it could use more of a build up. Still, it's better than most of what's on here, which is utter crap.