Reform School reviews
A good storyline with horrible writing.
One word: edit. the storyline was good, and the ending was profound and tear-jerking. or maybe i'm just hypersensitive to that sorta thing. but seriously, go with another story, then make sure you edit it. K?
uh i think you may be hypersensitive to that thing, lol. as the've said, nice try, but you don't have any grammatical highlights in your work mate.
I got off.....my pussy is dripping now.......mmmmm
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His sister is the object of all his fantasies, so much so that, as soon as the house is empty, he finds himself going through her underwear drawer. Only, he gets caught by their Dad, who makes him go from sniffing sister's panties to wearing them. Daddy's also turned on by his hot daughter and has just found a useful substitute! |
Stories By Niche:
- indian
- short
- ghost
- porn
- scary
- bedtime
- bdsm
- spanking
- adult
- inspirational
- funny
- love
- xxx
- cuckold
- hot
- bondage
- motivational
- horror
- moral
- black
- romantic
- bible
- wedgie
- femdom
- real wife
- diaper
- sissy
- mind control
- gangbang
- milf
- threesome
- success
- female masturbation
- christmas
- foot fetish
- erotica
- bullying
- dirty
- naughty
- taboo
- fuck
- blowjob
- facesitting