Reform School reviews

A good storyline with horrible writing.

One word: edit. the storyline was good, and the ending was profound and tear-jerking. or maybe i'm just hypersensitive to that sorta thing. but seriously, go with another story, then make sure you edit it. K?

uh i think you may be hypersensitive to that thing, lol. as the've said, nice try, but you don't have any grammatical highlights in your work mate.

I got off.....my pussy is dripping now.......mmmmm