My first time reviews

I find father/son sex stories to be a huge turn on. But this one seemed to have either been written by a five year-old or someone in a big hurry. There is no punctuation!! And please check your work before you submit it. There were sentences that made no sense, bad grammar and on and on. It took away from the believability of the story.

this was god awful...its like you where trying to write a bad story on purpose, I hope next time you write a story, you make a halfway decent story, i dont ever wanna waste my time on such garbage again.