My Mom's Best Friend reviews

Made sense to me. Perhaps the many spacing and punctuation errors caused some confusion. Otherwise a nice story.

The story showed real potential, but I got the feeling you were tired of typing and rushed it--should've hit the brakes a bit and eased through. Otherwise good effort!

In a word...crap!

Ok for all thoes who have read this and though it was bad.. I dont think it was bad at all. it was a great story.. I enjoyed.. Try and put urself in the story next time.. I wish i could have been there to give and take a few lessons..... Thanks for the wonderful storys.. If you have any more u would like to share please let me know..

I thought it was good too...just a fantasy. Oh how I like those LOL...

great story

It was a wonderful story keep writing.

Oh my goodness that was one of the BEST stories I've read so far on this website, I would like to thank you for writing such an amazing story