My 18 year old girlfriend reviews

omfg that was the most fucking romantic story ive ever heard!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thankyou Brittany, I am working on a part 2. I was thinking about having a female write part two, from Samantha's point of view.

Hardly any erotic feelings in this story .It is like a school boy's essay. Too much of description about himself makes the story rather drab and dry.This should not be the styile of an erotic story.Just kissing and squeezing boobs will not make an erotc story. To be successful give the reader real thrill.

omfg... This is the most touching sex story i've ever read. Great story and love it...

thanks for share!

thank you for share!

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