Maternal Instincts reviews

Dude, you have some SERIOUS issues! Before you attempt to write a story, try writing from the heart. Not the spure of the moment. There are only three main concepts to your story; I am horny, I need sex, This is an "incest" site. You lack build up and style.

KISS- "keep it simple, stupid"; perhaps you've heard this concept. As for issues, well, who doesn't have them- this is about a pet peeve, a social phenomenon, and the most obvious argument against monogamy- women who withold sex to control men. As for writing from the heart, it was written from my own disgust, and a realistic understanding of what a slutty, but concerned mom might do for a mistreated, neglected married son. Denying someone sex to control him is a breach of contract.

Those who can, write; those who can't, criticize!

Actually, the themes of this story are: a. a mother's love and concern for her grown-up, married son; b. the false advertising of marriage, in that it purports to guarantee sexual satisfaction for life,; c. the wickedness of some wives, girlfriends, etc., who withold sex as a means of dominating their lovers/husbands; d. the circumstances that might prompt a previously somewhat conventional, faithful husband to fuck his mother, as opposed to just being faithful to the undeserving, or cheating with a regular mistress. If you ask me, the villain of this story is the wife, not the husband or his mother.

Obviously, "Duh" was on pot when he read this story, or he might have caught the real themes, and not been so damn stupid in his review, not to mention redundant about it. He would not have used "Dude" in his review, either. Be warned- I don't ask for a positive review, just a fair, accurate one, and those who deny me that consideration will be repeatedly insulted, as they deserve. I am not about forgiveness, or any other "herd morality" bullshit.

Thank you, David. It is nice to get some positive feedback on this story for a change.

I loved this story and it pisses me off that "DUH" is not really reading it right! other wise he would have seen that SEVERUSMAX has used a lot of imagination to keep it from being like all the other "mother son storys" Duh can't even come up with a good nick name, but of course DUH fits him good! It pisses me off when someone does not give someone else the credit they deserve! I even like part two that is on another site!