Ghost Boyfriend reviews
Very well written, this is clearly something you haven't just thrown togethr. I'm most impressed by the plot, the emotional descriptions as well as the physical descriptions, which really allow the reader to become part of the story. A sweet and moving tale despite some mechanics errors.
You REALLY need to get an editor. Your grammatical mistakes make the story much less enjoyable.
Oh my god that was so touching! i cryd. ths story was amazing!
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Then I carried her to bed and waited by the bedside to make sure she's sound asleep. After 10 minutes, I sneaked into Jennifer's room. There I saw her lying with one of her leg sticking out of the bed revealing her smooth inner thigh... |
Stories By Niche:
- indian
- short
- ghost
- porn
- scary
- bedtime
- bdsm
- spanking
- adult
- inspirational
- funny
- love
- xxx
- cuckold
- hot
- bondage
- motivational
- horror
- moral
- black
- romantic
- bible
- wedgie
- femdom
- real wife
- diaper
- sissy
- mind control
- gangbang
- milf
- threesome
- success
- female masturbation
- christmas
- foot fetish
- erotica
- bullying
- dirty
- naughty
- taboo
- fuck
- blowjob
- facesitting