Very well written. The introduction is long enough to build mood, without being overly detailed. The story moves well and the dialog is believable. I very much enjoyed the 'mature' style of the story and will eagerly read others by this author.
Posted by SEVERUSMAX
Catherine clearly does not get the point of bondage- it is mutual pleasure, but the pleasure of the masochist is linked to receiving pain, while the sadist enjoys inflicting it! I don't want to dominate someone who won't get off on it!
Posted by heather
wow, very very thrilling and hot! part 2 here i cum!
Posted by trueman's lover
More! Please write more!
Posted by Taylor-Margaret
You HAVE to keep going. I love bondage and submission, and have always felt the need to be submissive. I would love to have a master and think i may have found the perfect candidate.. but, i like to read up on bondage, so i know exactly what he expects of me. I would love to keep reading your story, and please send me an email when you update this story.
Posted by jacob767
This Story is great, when will their be a continuaion, if one exists plese email me! Great story!
Posted by jacob767
Where is part 2!!!!
Posted by Hislynn
Part 4 please!!!!
Posted by daze
yes it would love to be train like this. excellent story
Posted by daze
yes it would love to be train like this but it does not know if it could last a year, it knows that it would be totally broken if it did. it would like to try it for a month to start
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