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This story was spoiled by poor punctuation, verbal tense problems, words misused or mispelled, and completely mishandled dialogue. The current style of crime writing is to use the present tense, so, if that's what you want to do, stick with it.
You switched around all of this stuff and had horrrible spelling, punctuation and grammar. Sorry but that story really sucked.
dam I wish I was the girl cop
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When two best friends play a little game of Truth or Dare, neither knows how far they'll go to prove that they never turn down a dare... |
Stories By Niche:
- indian
- short
- ghost
- porn
- scary
- bedtime
- bdsm
- spanking
- adult
- inspirational
- funny
- love
- xxx
- cuckold
- hot
- bondage
- motivational
- horror
- moral
- black
- romantic
- bible
- wedgie
- femdom
- real wife
- diaper
- sissy
- mind control
- gangbang
- milf
- threesome
- success
- female masturbation
- christmas
- foot fetish
- erotica
- bullying
- dirty
- naughty
- taboo
- fuck
- blowjob
- facesitting