The Rookie (First Time Story) reviews

It is a really good story. Althogh I hope it isn't true. i would hate to think of the waste of this promising young life.

WOW I HAVE READ MANY MANY STORIES AND AFTER A WHLE THEY SEEM TO GET BOREING.this one is really good what a sad ending which unfotuneately i can attest to

Frkanly I think that's absolutely good stuff.

Wow well written great story was wet all the way thrum it ....sorry about josh tho....rather sad

well Mrs Deborah S love your writing and sorry that the your inspiration is your dead beloved but like you said we have to continue living about you last question in this charter "where all the Love and Romance have gone " well if you are a american female I will tell you do not for it in america because you will not find it with a reg american Boy/man maybe you will find it with a Latin men or european but not american american male think the female is a odjec that they own or control and some of them think that female do not have the right to chose the partner for their life believe me I have know a few that think this way if you want to discus this matter feel free to contac me we go from there in the mean time love you writing take care