The librarian reviews

Good story, got me hard!

you should try to write these storys from one of the characters perspective. instead of always writing as if your a camera in the room watching the story.it would be a hell of a lot more sexy that way. you are hung up on quotations i can see. its a sex story your writing here. you may want to try and remember that. your story ideas are alright but you seem as if your trying to be a profesional writer instead of conveying the story as an expierience.not hot at all.quit trying to act educated.your not anyway, or if you are its getting in the way of your writing. so tell the story as it would happen.not some poorly written playboy version of it.you do that with all your storys.drop most of the qoutation it doesnt make you sound smart if thats what your trying to achieve.the words tell the story not the commas and periods.

In awe of that anwser! Really cool!

I carry on listening to the reports talk about receiving boundless online grant applications so I have been looking around for the top site to get one. Could you advise me please, where could i get some?

At least you know what your kids ate..I slept in today so they probably got away with alot of swetes too....I love shaking up the breakfast routine..you go girl...hope there is no dentist appointment today...