The best friday ever reviews

good story made me wish i was there.

Nice story, liked it a lot, hope for a sequel. Note though, watch your grammer and spelling, type it first in Word or whatever to make sure it's right.

Learn the proper use of grammar, how to spell, and not to make run-on sentences. You used the word "suppressed" for "surprised." A basic 6th grade education would do a lot for you.

Great story. A little annoyed with the description of how things tasted.