The Next Door Neighbors reviews

very nice story, please continue writing, it had a good plot and was written very well, but next time maybe try to put some more emotional content as well, devolp your characters and keep them growing. also, try to avoide mistakes like saying rhea has green eyes then at the end you say she has blue eyes.

nice stuf. you definitely got the right stuff there. but some elaboration would definitely rock.

great story, good writing

i like this story best probally because i live rite by snoqualmie washington so i know wut its like there

if u live in snoqualmie and go to school u must go to mount si

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