The Naomi Chronicles 1 reviews

Finally! An erotic story with intelligent characterization and no braindead dialogues! Good stuff, Mike, keep them coming!

absolutly brilliant. you are very talented mike. the way you present your characters is so arousing, and your right, those normal fuck and suck stories are so boring. keep your stories coming to keep me cuming.

fun read.good work,i'll look forward to more........

i lke it