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The Game ... First Time Sex: Part 23 - Loving Marcus reviews

Posted by dd
You fooled me at first Glad that part was a dream because I like reading about all you guys Hot hot is all I can say
Posted by Galaxy
Hey DD, be assured, it was just a dream, hehe. Thanks always for your continued interest in the story.
Posted by Ghouls
The beginning totally fooled me too, i was like "was this all so far in the past then..?" glad it wasnt a dream, i hole the next chapter doesnt end it all :P hope to read much more
Posted by Ghouls
Will do, good luck!
Posted by David
it was good keep writing them
Posted by Galaxy
Hey David! Always look forward to your note! You have stayed with me since the beginning, and I sinderely appreciate your encouragement.
Posted by Tanker
This was funny. You're story is super.
Posted by Galaxy
Thanks once again Tanker. We all need to step back and laugh at ourselves every now and then.
Posted by Ginger
You fooled me completely. After the last chapter I thought it was over. Please keep writing please!
Posted by Galaxy
Hi Ginger! Thanks for keeping up with the story. Glad you like it!
Posted by David
cool story
Posted by Galaxy
David, Thanks once again for leaving feedback. I appreciate your words always!
Posted by Serenity
Wow I'm not the only one who got fooled haha. Nice Job Galaxy :P
Posted by Galaxy
Hey Serenity! Thanks for leaving a note. Dreams are mysterious, confusing, and sometimes very embarassing to say the least. I'm not a very good pot smoker, so I'll prolly be drinking wine in the future.
Posted by declan
hahaha i got half way through it and i thought nah this is a dream haha but once again. Great story mate. I got my girlfriend and a few mates hooked on your stories
Posted by Galaxy
Declan!! Oh wow Thanks pal! I appreciate your message. Just sippin' some merlot and checked the website and you made my night! Please keep in touch!
Posted by Nova
man that was epic, i was like ''what the hell !!!'' at the start but then loved how the story progressed. Keep up with the good work.
Posted by sunil
hi
Posted by Galaxy
Hello Nova! Thanks for your encouragement. I've been contemplating just writing one more chapter. In real life, it's been nearly 8 months since the High Sierra Festival and a lot has happened. After so much has been exposed, I'm not sure I can keep anyone's interest although there is a lot to write about. Again, thanks for the compliment!
Posted by Galaxy
Hey Sunil! Thanks for leaving a note. I have no idea how many have read the chapters until someone leaves me a note!
Posted by Galaxy
Hi Sassy, Thanks for the note. I'm glad you like the chapters.
Posted by 25 or more
I read all of the stories more than once. It's a great story. Please don't stop! You're really hot.
Posted by Galaxy
Thanks 25! I have 3/4 of the new, edited story completed. I can't believe how many errors that I have corrected! There are also 6 new chapters. Please stay in touch. All who have read the first attempts will be rewarded with the new versions in the future. Thanks again!
Posted by mia
Blurred line of fantasy and reality..its all the same. Your writes get better and better. Hot series. Look foward to the book
Posted by vinod
waiting or ur story dude
Posted by vinod
hey whats the password for teasingreality website
Posted by Vinod
Update it
Posted by vinod
Hi galaxy please update this series i am great fan of this series
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