The Game ... First Time Sex: Part 23 - Loving Marcus reviews

You fooled me at first Glad that part was a dream because I like reading about all you guys Hot hot is all I can say

Hey DD, be assured, it was just a dream, hehe. Thanks always for your continued interest in the story.

The beginning totally fooled me too, i was like "was this all so far in the past then..?" glad it wasnt a dream, i hole the next chapter doesnt end it all :P hope to read much more

Will do, good luck!

it was good keep writing them

Hey David! Always look forward to your note! You have stayed with me since the beginning, and I sinderely appreciate your encouragement.

This was funny. You're story is super.

Thanks once again Tanker. We all need to step back and laugh at ourselves every now and then.

You fooled me completely. After the last chapter I thought it was over. Please keep writing please!

Hi Ginger! Thanks for keeping up with the story. Glad you like it!

cool story

David, Thanks once again for leaving feedback. I appreciate your words always!

Wow I'm not the only one who got fooled haha. Nice Job Galaxy :P

Hey Serenity! Thanks for leaving a note. Dreams are mysterious, confusing, and sometimes very embarassing to say the least. I'm not a very good pot smoker, so I'll prolly be drinking wine in the future.

hahaha i got half way through it and i thought nah this is a dream haha but once again. Great story mate. I got my girlfriend and a few mates hooked on your stories

Declan!! Oh wow Thanks pal! I appreciate your message. Just sippin' some merlot and checked the website and you made my night! Please keep in touch!

man that was epic, i was like ''what the hell !!!'' at the start but then loved how the story progressed. Keep up with the good work.

hi

Hello Nova! Thanks for your encouragement. I've been contemplating just writing one more chapter. In real life, it's been nearly 8 months since the High Sierra Festival and a lot has happened. After so much has been exposed, I'm not sure I can keep anyone's interest although there is a lot to write about. Again, thanks for the compliment!

Hey Sunil! Thanks for leaving a note. I have no idea how many have read the chapters until someone leaves me a note!

Hi Sassy, Thanks for the note. I'm glad you like the chapters.

I read all of the stories more than once. It's a great story. Please don't stop! You're really hot.

Thanks 25! I have 3/4 of the new, edited story completed. I can't believe how many errors that I have corrected! There are also 6 new chapters. Please stay in touch. All who have read the first attempts will be rewarded with the new versions in the future. Thanks again!

Blurred line of fantasy and reality..its all the same. Your writes get better and better. Hot series. Look foward to the book

waiting or ur story dude

hey whats the password for teasingreality website

Update it

Hi galaxy please update this series i am great fan of this series