The College Experience reviews

Man, write a sequel to this story. It's real good and I'm about to read it over again later on. You did a great job writing this story. Do a sequel.

very good, but I think you mixed up Jenn and Mary a couple of times

this was an excellent story i would give it one of the highest ranks

Maybe too much action to be believable. The third person point of view and lack of dialogue prevent it from being really lively.

Thanx for your replies. I appreciate it. I'm glad it was not too bad.

story was good, you just need to pay more attention to the names. You got Jenn and Mary mixed up a lot. Other than that, pretty good

Good story, just need to check spelling and grammer...It lost my attention for a moment each time I had to figure out what you were really trying to say

GREAT stiry...there were a few problems wid transitions, but all in all....it wasa grate plot...also fix up some of the grammar....

i really enjoyed this story, a few grammer problems but all in all it was very good. i would like to read part two if you would be kind enough to write it......

Part 2, Well, I've been busy, and this story was really easy to write because it was in my head for a week, so I pretty much jotted it down. Yeah I guess I didn't spend enough time proof reading it, I wrote it, put it in Microsoft Word, did spell check and grammer, then pasted it back for submit. Next time I will proof read, hehe, my bad, By the time I was finished with it I just wanted to submit it and goto bed. I'm glad you guys liked it, I'll see about a part 2 after I'm done with all this school crap. Summer is soon, so I should be able to write down the second one. It's just not really fresh in my head because of all this school stuff, so I don't think it would be as good as this one. I'm glad you guys liked it and I'm sorry again for not taking time to proof read it. If I can edit it, maybe I'll do that in a little bit as well.

writer could not keep the names straight

fuck you it sucks

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it was good got a little confusing after a wile and you should use more discription than 69 and what have you

fukkin great story.

really hot action great stuff

it was pretty good

hot....

FUCKING AWSOME!!!!

Do a sequel.

I hate my life but at least this makes it beaarlbe.

You are so awesome for helnpig me solve this mystery.

Gracias! Feliz af1o nuevo! Que todos los eventos de este af1o la forma mejor de lo que podreda sunoper, incluso en mis suef1os me1s salvajes! Buena suerte y optimismo!