The Club reviews

extremely hot! i got as turned on as cliff.

A bit short, and it needed better editing, but a nice little tale.

I feel as if I've fucked you. That was wicked, if your a chick you've been fucked by me, if your a guy, then your damn good as writing as a chick. Anyhow, if anyone criticizes this one, then they don't know how to read erotic stories, this is a gem. I don't know how you writers of erotica do it on this site, but you all seem to copy a format. Well anyway you have mastered it I find. It was NO not too short. For this story the timing of the ending was like fluke. Great, an admierer. I c you've claimed to be well read, well good for you... Most good writers do that.

about this story too, I think the "jumps" into action, or into flaring up the pace, was done with a subtle yet strong manuverability that is impressive. Write! Your brain their is like a emotional computer with it's superior calculations. Continue to tweak the human condition, the aura of sex is a specialty. Is their a muse for sex? It's helping you I think. Anyhow, I like dramatic effects, I like to shower myself through this only because I truely do admire your writing here. I'm somewhat jealous I'll admit it. Even if I shouldn't be !!! Well take it as you will, all I hope for is that your eyes will behold the humble praise I pour out to you. From one human in void to another, our predicament NEEDS love. I think you have measure and talent .....

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I haven't seen anything he potesd -- any of the porn, anyway -- but my guess is they'd have a hell of a time getting a conviction. In an age when Penthouse is available in Barnes and Noble, yet publishes golden showers pictures, that whole "community standards" thing becomes a real bitch.