That's My Little Girl reviews

Absolute shit, the poor use of the english laguage forces the reader to struggle to get through the story. Learn the language before you attempt to write any more stories!

Sorry, this story sucked. It was dry and just boring. You should try to make it more passionate or sensual, not dry up crap.

This could have been perked up a little and received a better spelling and grammar check, and I think the previous three comments are on point. Tanya is right is saying that the story is mediocre, but, if it is a first effort, so what! Live and learn.

I WOULD LIKE TO READ THIS STORY