Sweetness reviews
Good story except for the contrived surprise ending.
Your storie was great but, you didnt finish. what incest was committed? you had enough of other person sex but none with a member of the family. You need another addition to the storie to let the reader know what happened when Kali entered the truck
I loved it. You write well and convey the scene well, but I need more. Don't stop now! There needs to be a continuum. Please?
I have to say that I agree with everyone about the ending, but you are an excellent writer....and that was a great story.
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The cum shot out of the end of his penis with such force that the hole in the end of his cock felt like it was going to split apart with pleasure/pain. Jim was breathing deeply as his orgasm continued. After Andrea was covered with his semen and she was valiantly trying to lick it off his penis and lap up that which had dripped from her mouth on him... |
Stories By Niche:
- indian
- short
- ghost
- porn
- scary
- bedtime
- bdsm
- spanking
- adult
- inspirational
- funny
- love
- xxx
- cuckold
- hot
- bondage
- motivational
- horror
- moral
- black
- romantic
- bible
- wedgie
- femdom
- real wife
- diaper
- sissy
- mind control
- gangbang
- milf
- threesome
- success
- female masturbation
- christmas
- foot fetish
- erotica
- bullying
- dirty
- naughty
- taboo
- fuck
- blowjob
- facesitting