Sweetness reviews
Good story except for the contrived surprise ending.
Your storie was great but, you didnt finish. what incest was committed? you had enough of other person sex but none with a member of the family. You need another addition to the storie to let the reader know what happened when Kali entered the truck
I loved it. You write well and convey the scene well, but I need more. Don't stop now! There needs to be a continuum. Please?
I have to say that I agree with everyone about the ending, but you are an excellent writer....and that was a great story.
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He bit her lips puckering it up and then sucked on it, tasting the strawberry lip-gloss on her lips. She drew him closer to her, wanting to feel his body on hers, her head fell back and he kissed her throat then sucked her boobs through the material she wore... |
Stories By Niche:
- indian
- short
- ghost
- porn
- scary
- bedtime
- bdsm
- spanking
- adult
- inspirational
- funny
- love
- xxx
- cuckold
- hot
- bondage
- motivational
- horror
- moral
- black
- romantic
- bible
- wedgie
- femdom
- real wife
- diaper
- sissy
- mind control
- gangbang
- milf
- threesome
- success
- female masturbation
- christmas
- foot fetish
- erotica
- bullying
- dirty
- naughty
- taboo
- fuck
- blowjob
- facesitting