Sweetness reviews

Good story except for the contrived surprise ending.

Your storie was great but, you didnt finish. what incest was committed? you had enough of other person sex but none with a member of the family. You need another addition to the storie to let the reader know what happened when Kali entered the truck

I loved it. You write well and convey the scene well, but I need more. Don't stop now! There needs to be a continuum. Please?

I have to say that I agree with everyone about the ending, but you are an excellent writer....and that was a great story.