Sharing Black (part 1) reviews
Story had everything a girl could want! Can't wait for the next installment!
learn how to spell..the ghetto speak was really bad
This reminded me of "Flyy Girl" and other books like that. I can't wait for the second part!
i loved this story i cant wait until the next part. i think that u did a hell of a job with the whole story not just the sex
Great story.... I really enjoyed it... KEEP writing them.... And I like the "ghetto" speak... it gives your story a personal, down to earth note... GREAT JOB!
Awful... After the first "fa sho" I figured 'ok, let it slide', but it got worse and worse.... learn to spell. Ghetto talk is for the ghetto. If you want to stay there for the rest of your life, then I guess that's fine for you.
I have read a lot of stories..honestly...but this was a great one...because it was real it touched me...I cried at the end....I think who ever the writer is should write a book....
Hey, GREAT story, I liked the "Ghetto" talk, it made the story seem real. I love the lenght of the story. I did not want it to end. I cannot wait for the next stories. Keep up the good work!!!!
that story was tight as hell. very realistic.
dis story was off da fucking chain.keep writing.Write a book next.
this story was hella good i liked it
Wow I really did NOT expect the ending. Damn.
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Stories By Niche:
- indian
- short
- ghost
- porn
- scary
- bedtime
- bdsm
- spanking
- adult
- inspirational
- funny
- love
- xxx
- cuckold
- hot
- bondage
- motivational
- horror
- moral
- black
- romantic
- bible
- wedgie
- femdom
- real wife
- diaper
- sissy
- mind control
- gangbang
- milf
- threesome
- success
- female masturbation
- christmas
- foot fetish
- erotica
- bullying
- dirty
- naughty
- taboo
- fuck
- blowjob
- facesitting
