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Sharing Black The Ultimate Betrayal (The Uncut Version) part 2 reviews

Posted by ann
you have mad talent shyblou keep up the good work. looking forward to part three, by the way when it that coming out?
Posted by lo-down
superb!
Posted by jana
hot little teen story! you sure know how to bring back memories, and how teenagers think.
Posted by Johnny B Good
Superb! Long, but superb! I think I aught to read all of them.
Posted by Shauntee
I can't wait to read more UNCUT versions of your stories. Greatest by far!
Posted by ShyB
My next installment is about how life between Lajoria and Black change. Then I will write about Black's mother-in-law. Hope you all like them.
Posted by Sharon T
I like the Black versions better but they all were good. Keep on writing, and I'll keep on reading!
Posted by sharmaine
I love your stories, I'll keep looking for newer ones!
Posted by lil' bump
too good to be true!
Posted by Piper4560
to sum it all up in a nut shell i liked this story and can't wait for the next installment of it.
Posted by meonetta
GREAT!
Posted by Jax
I hope to read the next installment soon, Great story!
Posted by Shane248
two thumbs up!
Posted by Chocltgrl23
Let me start by sayin that u have a talent that most ppl that write on this sight only wish 2 have. U had me from start 2 finish! I loved this story so much i had to let all my peeps read it! Even my teacher couldnt put it down! And your a young female! That was a shock 2. Im from da ghetto and that was a week on my block. Keep doin yo thang grl! FUCK DA HATERS! Ill b waitin 4 da book. Whats the name gonna b?
Posted by steve
i like how ur stories are well outline and detail
Posted by Jace-o-lantern
Damn this was a long mutha fuckin' story, but well worth the read. You must be straight from da ghetto! Great story!!! When's the other ones coming out?
Posted by Cane&Able
The sex scenes could've been better but a good story line! Shorten it next time gosh!
Posted by Julia
wtf!!!
Posted by Yolanda1988
Someone told me to read this story and I did. Damn it was too long... It was good but too damn long!
Posted by dee dee
I would like to meet Black, he sounds like my kind of guy!!
Posted by annie
this story was great
Posted by Calandre Goudreau's space
Thank you for the good writeup. It in fact was a amusement account it. Look advanced to more added agreeable from you! However, how could we communicate?
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