Rena's first time reviews
A bit unrealistic. Some might complain about the length, but you warned that is was short andto the point. Otherwise, quite a nice little piece.
it was a good story but as the above person said a little short....it would be nice to be a little more descriptive when he cums in her pussy such as " I felt my cum spray against the depths of her virgin pussy" but I leave it to you you have a good start on writing.......Les
The story is nice and I would rate it as 6.
This actually answered my downside, thanks!
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A story set the early 19th century about to cousins who meet each other after 20 years despite their countries, their fathers and their brothers are at war with each other. The first part in many. |
Stories By Niche:
- indian
- short
- ghost
- porn
- scary
- bedtime
- bdsm
- spanking
- adult
- inspirational
- funny
- love
- xxx
- cuckold
- hot
- bondage
- motivational
- horror
- moral
- black
- romantic
- bible
- wedgie
- femdom
- real wife
- diaper
- sissy
- mind control
- gangbang
- milf
- threesome
- success
- female masturbation
- christmas
- foot fetish
- erotica
- bullying
- dirty
- naughty
- taboo
- fuck
- blowjob
- facesitting