Rena's first time reviews

A bit unrealistic. Some might complain about the length, but you warned that is was short andto the point. Otherwise, quite a nice little piece.

it was a good story but as the above person said a little short....it would be nice to be a little more descriptive when he cums in her pussy such as " I felt my cum spray against the depths of her virgin pussy" but I leave it to you you have a good start on writing.......Les

The story is nice and I would rate it as 6.

This actually answered my downside, thanks!