On Golden Lake Part 1 reviews

i thought it was starting to be a really great and hot as hell story but when it got into the guy and the boy i couldnt go any further, but to each his own i guess. but do have to say that when it comes to the writing it self, paul is a damn good writer, he puts a lot of details into his writing, not just another 5 minute fuck story. lot of other writers could take lessons from him in learning how to write.

i thought the details were great,but i didn't like the fact that this guy was trying all of these things with this young boy. Also it started to get to long so it took away from the story.

Just read part one. Looking forward to part 2.