Ocean's Song reviews

I honestly think you could draw this out into maybe a romance novel, it seems you have the talent.

Why, thank you! I have written several short stories before now, some erotic some not. Never thought to publish them though.

i like your story i would like you to write more.

WOW that was amazing you should continue writing this story it was the best one yet!!

Omg that was breath taking! i got the best chills reading this u really can write well and describe exactly how a woman wants to be touched.. sigh.. i wish i had a sea man thing! please do write more!!

The environment, the ocean, the ornamentation mixed with the x-animal of science fiction and together with the first carnal experience of a virgin culminated with the painful orgasm. This is perhaps the precis or the epilogue. I liked it.

Loved it!!! Read the second one loved it to!! Please write more.

I personally loved this story. Very interesting, turn it into a book and I would read it!

I LOVED IT!!!!! MORE PLEASE!!!!