Noise complaint reviews
many gramer mistakes are there, please correct it immidiately.
You rushed through the story too quickly. Take some time to enjoy the writing; make it sensual, an enjoyment to read, and pace it. It's like sex, you don't want to end it too fast. Use quotations for speech, and separate the story into better paragraphs. Make it more legible, and I'll raise the rating.
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Satisfied, Jane climbed out of the tub, only to see a black man staring at her from entrance to the sauna, his hand firmly tugging at his cock. |
Stories By Niche:
- indian
- short
- ghost
- porn
- scary
- bedtime
- bdsm
- spanking
- adult
- inspirational
- funny
- love
- xxx
- cuckold
- hot
- bondage
- motivational
- horror
- moral
- black
- romantic
- bible
- wedgie
- femdom
- real wife
- diaper
- sissy
- mind control
- gangbang
- milf
- threesome
- success
- female masturbation
- christmas
- foot fetish
- erotica
- bullying
- dirty
- naughty
- taboo
- fuck
- blowjob
- facesitting