Noise complaint reviews
many gramer mistakes are there, please correct it immidiately.
You rushed through the story too quickly. Take some time to enjoy the writing; make it sensual, an enjoyment to read, and pace it. It's like sex, you don't want to end it too fast. Use quotations for speech, and separate the story into better paragraphs. Make it more legible, and I'll raise the rating.
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Krystal has drink too much, and her brother's hot friend takes advantage of it... |
Stories By Niche:
- indian
- short
- ghost
- porn
- scary
- bedtime
- bdsm
- spanking
- adult
- inspirational
- funny
- love
- xxx
- cuckold
- hot
- bondage
- motivational
- horror
- moral
- black
- romantic
- bible
- wedgie
- femdom
- real wife
- diaper
- sissy
- mind control
- gangbang
- milf
- threesome
- success
- female masturbation
- christmas
- foot fetish
- erotica
- bullying
- dirty
- naughty
- taboo
- fuck
- blowjob
- facesitting