Night on the town reviews
You rushed through another one! Split up those big paragraphs. Add more detail and some dialogue.
Luke, I will take my time with the next one. I will reread it then take it all in. I will, I promise.
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Jacob goes to his cabin in the mountains for a few weeks of rest and relaxation and gets quite a pleasant suprise from a young waitress named Megan... |
Stories By Niche:
- indian
- short
- ghost
- porn
- scary
- bedtime
- bdsm
- spanking
- adult
- inspirational
- funny
- love
- xxx
- cuckold
- hot
- bondage
- motivational
- horror
- moral
- black
- romantic
- bible
- wedgie
- femdom
- real wife
- diaper
- sissy
- mind control
- gangbang
- milf
- threesome
- success
- female masturbation
- christmas
- foot fetish
- erotica
- bullying
- dirty
- naughty
- taboo
- fuck
- blowjob
- facesitting