Night Scene (part 3) reviews

I really enjoyed this story very well written with a great story line would have like to see a happier ending but not all stories end with happiness I congratulate the author well done!

This was a great story I relly enjoyed it. It was well written and showed a lot of creativity, hopefully you keep writing so i can keep reading. Check out one of mine and let me know how it is. I wrote "this is my story"

it was very good. part 3 made me cry..as for u wanting people opinion. heres mine...at the end of part 3 u married that guy. i would like to see u leave him for your love and be with her. it really disppointed me when i read u married that guy.

awesome story! Fiction o Non-fiction

I think all 3 parts of your story was great and I'm definately looking forward to your next part!!!!!!

That's a great story wish you were still with jas tho