Natural attraction reviews

This story sounds as if it were written by a third grader. I advise the author to read a grammer book before trying to write sex stories.

good story, just very, very bad writing. from reading this i can either suggest that you arn't all that intelligent or don't use english as your fist language. i'd go for the latter so next time, do try to make the story understandable. sorry, but as i said, it was a good idea, just written shockingly.

see kay? i can be nice.

sure honey.