My hot chick sis reviews

This story was simply awful. If you're going submit a story, could you please make sure that most of the spelling is correct, and that the grammar isn't laughable?

um no offense it made me wet but nice grammar haha !!

Wow, all you people are ass holes except for hotlust. The story was rushed a lot and wasn't the best but lay off the guy, damn.

Cmon man get your english togethere i'm 18 and stupid but i could write a better stoey then this next time don't just do write it in 2 seconds put some thought into it.

Very poorly written story by someone who never opened a grammar book in his life.

WOW JUST WOW THAT WAS UNBELIVEBLY BAD. I agree with almost everyone up there but hte surprising thing is ive never seen a story with this many reviews good job on that i guess but shit man that was just awful i mean i was crying from the shear stupidity it was rushed shitty spelling and just ugh.

I LOVED IT!!!! LOVED EVERY WORD !!!THIS IS CLASSIC EROTICA!!THE AUTHOR SHOULD BE GIVEN A PULITZER AND A NOBEL FOR LITERATURE !!! MAKE IT INTO A FILM,I SAY, AND THE OSCAR FOR BEST SCREENPLAY WON'T GO NOWHERE!!!KUDOS,CHEERS AND CONGRATULATIONS!!!