My first REAL sex reviews

Very short and kind of lame

kinda stupid, i mean the definition of sex is the penis entering the vagina, and you have to have sex to lose your virginity........so how could she have lost it to a cucumber? .....and as Wet said, VERY short, i think a lil to short, make it longer and more interesting

THAT SHIT WAS A WASTE OF FUCKING TIME. IM NOT EVEN HARD. dONT GIVE UP UR DAY JOB.

dumb ass story. the ending was lame and i hope u never write another

that was a stupid story. What the fuck were you thinking when you wrote it.

You should committ sucide after writting a story that fucking gay. What the fuck was that. It wasn't a Story thats for dame sure.

Hey that was a goood story. the best as a matter of fact. Just kidding that shit was dumb. Perhaps writting porn just isn't you. Perhaps u should try other things like jumping off a bridge.

I give that story a rating of negative 1 out of ten. That fuccking story was just fucking dumb, short, and senseless.

That Was a gay as story. Never write another as long as you live.

This site is now offering a section for writers who enjoy homo-erotic stories. It is obvious that you have no desire for women and know nothing about them. Go ahead, rewrite this story with a boy this time. I'm sure you'll discover something about yourself. I'll give you a clue: YOU ARE GAY!

you r good

Wow thatwas something. I do have one preblem with your stroy. It you have that that thibg in you first you are going to go back to it all the time. A girl never foreget her first