My cousin Tiffanie reviews

Too short and too rushed at the end. A few grammar and spelling issues, but the brevity was the big problem.

Good storie intil the ending you rushed into it to long not even lubricating her or yourself up first think of how to make it better but good topic!!!

the beginning was great but the end was just so rushed great story idea just lacked details

As they have all said, too rushed at the end. Great topic though, could have great potential.

It SUCKED! Poor story!

Let me rewrite this story for those who are too BORED by the "original." I met my cousin, she had a thong. She took a shower, I fucked her butt then her pussy. Hmmmmmmmm. Not many people would go from ass to snatch. Even fewer would try to relay a story about a virgin cousin just met who gave up both in reciprocate. Keep dreaming. But add some reality next time.

TO SHORT TO SHORT never ever make a story that short again