My Maid reviews

WTF DUDE CONTINUE IT,IT WAS AWESOME.......UNTIL THE LAST PARAGRAPH CONTINUE IT

Pretty good story.Continue the story with more.

good stories

a little too fast. not much of a build up

it was good i liked it

The wasn't good enough.

I have a gay porn addiction, and i would like to stop but it seems like it's on my mind a lot and i try not to think about it but i guess it's baceuse of the lack of distractions i have. what can i do to try and keep my mind off of it so i won't try to watch it?

lol. I didn't even think of the unintended cencequonses of the picture. Thanks for reminding me why I am good on accident.I did it at an open mic to mediocre response. I've been writing a lot, so other things take preference right now, simply because I know where they fit in my set list. This I don't know if it fits yet.

I cant wait to read more