Movies reviews

Nice story! I love it! I was ever aroused and i'm a girl!

interesting point of view. you could have cut out the unnecessary details and kept it shorter.

I agree with Marcus; too much detail can take the edge and arousal off of a story! some detail is just not necessary. i would have gave it a 3/5 i've definately read better, but i've definetly read worse! good job.

I totally disagree. I think that this story had just the right amount of detail. I mean you need detail to make a story arousing, right???

ya it was quite arousing. a good one after lots of time. congo. 5/5.

I cannot tell a lie, that rellay helped.