Melissa reviews

Maybe too much in too short a story -- sure didn't seem like virgins to me.

I think you should try again. Maybe take your time in your writing. It seemed like towards the end you rushed it too much. You should have dwelled on them being nervous also if they are virgins. I dont know any virgin girl who asks to be fucked in the ass

I think that the storie was good except at the end it seemed to be a little rushed and any virgin that will take it up the ass aint really a virgin.