Medoka was my first oriental woman reviews

One big wall of words, barely worth reading. You really need to work on spacing along with punctuation.

OH GREAT!! A fucking English teacher!!!

Your writing is not bad, but the story is too long! Try shorter stories, with more situations! Also, you use way too many exclamation points! Not everything is that exiting! Use them only when something is truly surprising, or when quoting someone who is yelling!

This was a great story. Well written and the sex explanation was great I played twice with myself'