Me and my bestie reviews

Keep it up, intresting but a short one

not bad.but.................

Here's a tip, its good to have dialogue. It makes the story more interesting and it shows more than tells which is good for a story. Hope this helps ya but other than that it's not bad ^^

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My fanitacy is to have a gurl eat me and fuck me im str8 bt i always wanted to do that...

hey superb

Love the story Sexy babe i want to do it with you!

crap dint get me wet very dissapointed

i really wanted to fuck after hearing that story my freind started humping meeeee at a sleepover so i rode her until i came

mmmm nice,you i was enjoying the story then it ended,you would be good at writing a book hun xx

As I read that story I could feel that big long black cock pushing into my virgin ass. My cock so hard so fast as he fucked me hard. After he was finished with my ass he rolled me over and told me to open my to take his cook.