Land down Under reviews

Definitely better than the standard fair. You captured the eroticism of the fetish quite well. A little hard to read, though, with such short paragraphs and no paragraph breaks.

A good penalty for the wife to suffer! Serves her right for denying him sex! No one has the right to deprive his or her partner of sex, and expect that partner to be celibate- it is a breach of contract worse than sneaking around, as far I'm concerned!

That's the reason Penny is treated so harshly in "Hank Wakes Up The Neighbors- Part Two". She was a bitch, who really had it coming!