Lady Evelyn of Dulain, Part I of many... reviews

Part I of many? not to be rude, but don't waste your time. Ok, i'm being rude. whatever

Well written, but most definitely not my thing. Try using more plot and build up. It may make the story better.

Not a bad start, but it was somewhat short. Let's hear the rest.

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