Jennifer's Black Lingerie reviews

great story!

sequel?? that was hot :D

It was obvious early on that this was written by a man and for a man. I think it's important to know that tongue fucking doesn't feel like a man would think it does, licking is one thing, of ur in the right region, but think about it a sec..ur tongue isn't long, or wide enuf for it to feel good when guys use it like the penis or fingers can be used .. the tongue should be lightly sucking, heavily licking, teasing, or just focused heavily on and around the clit... I hope these notes can help u write something I can actually finish reading. One last thing, slow down.. for play makes for good play..