Janet’s first Time reviews

I give you much credit. Your storyline was very entertaining. Although i could not help but feel you were missing passion in this story. I think your a fine writer whom becomes bored with certain topics. Find something that means more to you that you will dwell on. I got the feeling you rushed through this story because you just wanted to be done with it. Patience is everything my friend. I would rather you write one great story than 800 decent ones. Use you brain and your heart.

I enjoyed your story............could have included more of a build up or seductive tease but otherwise I liked it.

wow, a very hot and stimulating story

That is a very beautiful story