Ida Found Her Pleasure reviews
Write it in a different format - perhaps 1st person - and it might be able to be read. Also use past tense.
Please learn the English language before attempting to write erotic novels. This pidgin English results in lost hardons.
It would be a good story if English was good. Anyway, exciting indeed.
what
seriously, learn to write english, this is a joke!
mmm good story
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Stories By Niche:
- indian
- short
- ghost
- porn
- scary
- bedtime
- bdsm
- spanking
- adult
- inspirational
- funny
- love
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- cuckold
- hot
- bondage
- motivational
- horror
- moral
- black
- romantic
- bible
- wedgie
- femdom
- real wife
- diaper
- sissy
- mind control
- gangbang
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- threesome
- success
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- christmas
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- facesitting