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Nice. definitely nice. good start. now develop.
i like your story, can you write more of the series?
thanks for your reviews, sure, i'll keep writing.
This is not so long that it could have been lengthened with some sexier material -- after all, this is a sex story site. I have no problem with your using a fairly large amount of background to set the scene, but let's see at least a hint of what is coming. Otherwise, it is a good start.
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"Did you love hard cocks," Gil asked!?! Ned got a far away look in her eyes and replied, "Oh yes, Gil, I'm just as addicted to large organs as you are, and you'll find as you get older, the more addicted you'll become!!!"... |
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