I saw stars -part one- reviews

You need to learn how to spell. This story sounds as if a 9 year old wrote it. Good grief....stay in school little girl...finish your education...and don't plan on writing as a career.

DUMB DUMB DUMB

finish i wanna c where it goes i liked it not the best but not 2 bad either look at rating others seem 2 like it 2

It was not as bad as some of the reveiws implied...but spelling and punctuation were off a little. i wish it would have had a sex scene, but on the up side it keeps you wanting more. Good Work and am looking forward to the next installment

It wasn't bad at all, waitin fer part 2

It hugged sac.

It soundsed good so far...I cant wait to read the rest.

thanks for share!