Hotel Chapter One reviews

ONE BIGGGG PARAGRAPH!!! This was a nice story except for the terrible spacing problem. Please note that every time a speaker changes, you need to begin a new paragraph, and do the same at breaks in the action.

Thanks for the feedback. It was incredibly brave of you to attempt to read it like that, but it was actually a formatting error and has now been rectified, thank goodness.

This is very sexy story! When is part 2?

This is the best incest story here.

Fascinating, with the notion of vicarious incest! That Alana character is a paradox- an ogler who pretends that she hates being ogled herself. She puts on a front, but trust a well-travelled man, even a young one, to see past that to her true nature. I'm curious about how you gave your own name to her daughter- do you have a Mom like Alana, and brother like Matt?

Also, it sounds like she wanted someone to dominate her, so as to free her to defy social mores and get very "naughty". This is quite common, of course, but in a MILF, it is particularly appealing; I, for one, find the idea of controlling and enslaving an older woman to be one of the most delicious thoughts!

I just read chapter 2 does the bitch get to fuck her son or what?

I think she's already done Greg, how about making it Matt's turn?