Her first orgasm reviews

this was one of t he worst stories on here ive read so far it was not good at all i could write a better story then that lol it wasnt long enough you shouldve put more foreplay type stuff in it and lead up to the first time sex and why would she have to make it up to the guy hes fucking her for the first time shes ever been fucked she shouldnt have to make anything up it sh ouldve been longer and better!

good one but not so erotic

Back in school, I'm doing so much laerinng.

Before you write anything else, learn some basic English. The story is riddled with so much poor language that it detracts from the "story". This is probably one of the worst, if not the worst, story I have ever read.