Her day. reviews

Nice story, more talk and detail would have made it even better.

You have now lost her, be a man and divorce her she will only do it again and could even present you with a black baby, how she going to explain this to you as you allowed it to happen.

Where is part 2. I agree with other comments kick them both out NO TRUST and BETRAYAL of a marriage its DEAD.

Please finish this storey, its very good , but needs an ending, its been left in the air and the reader does not know which way its going.