Helping Sandy Cool Off reviews

This story is well written. Your sentences sometimes tend to run and your words at some points become repretory. Other than that, you have a good sense of what you want to write. Although, i cant help but to think you got this story from somewhere. As a matter of fact, i remember Patrick M writing a story called the repairman. Maybe you should take a look at it. Unless you already have.

I find it interesting that Jackie wrote a review. Have you fucked her yet?